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His eyes search mine for the hurt he knows is lurking behind them.
But my soul is burning bright behind them, shielding my emotions.
He follows me out into the rain as I spin my umbrella up and around.
The rain giving away a lot more about me, than my dry eyes do.
He reassures me with a warm gaze that goes deeper than anyone’s has before.
My frozen heart warms up around the edges as he makes a promise.
A promise that he may never, be able to keep.
I offer my hand to him, to show him that everything was ok.
His hand was warm, rough and enclosing, my hand tingles from the contact.
With one last look I turn away into the night, his eyes forever engraved into my soul.
©2006-2010 ~Shadow-child
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um, this is about something that happened to me the other day, without going into any detail, lets just say he said, no. But for all the right reaons. Yea i was hurting so i needed to write about it beofre i forgot wat that night was like.



Hope u enjoy anyway

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:iconangel-child-le:
whoa...

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I'm the pink sheep in the family
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Vertically blonde
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i love it there just so much in it just rather speechless :+fav:

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I cradle this body, my temple, and wait,
Whisper of better days,
And I still know so little.
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do you have a secret?
:iconshadow-child:
aww thank u so much :) :nod:

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:iconsparks018:
I agree, it is very powerful and I can feel the pain.

I really like this - I wish I was able to write about this subject with such vigour.

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"I thoroughly disapprove of duels. If a man should challenge me, I would take him kindly and forgivingly by the hand and lead him to a quiet place and kill him."

Mark Twain
:iconshadow-child:
:blush: thanks :)

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:iconsilver-rage:
powerful n heart wrenching.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
:iconshadow-child:
thanks :nod: it hurt, but hey at least it made me write. Im glad u likd it an thanks 4 tha fave as well :)

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our inspirations comes from our deepest pain. it was good and u r welcome.

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I will survive somehow I always do.

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